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Need some honest opinions

Postby Ramer » Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:57 pm

I'm just getting my team site up and running, and I'd like the opinions of the fine AP community. I still have some touching up to do, but I'd simply like to know what you think so far. If you have any tips or suggestions, please feel free to post them. I'm open to ideas.

Here's the link: http://excoboard.com/breach9k

So, whatcha think?
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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Sir Stubby Eyre » Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:11 pm

Personally I don't care for the baby blue back ground. But that is just a personal choice.
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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Ramer » Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:14 pm

Sir Stubby Eyre wrote:Personally I don't care for the baby blue back ground. But that is just a personal choice.


Oh crap I forgot to change that stupid thing. It always shows for like a split second right before my actual background pops up. Thanks for reminding me to fix that lol
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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Ramer » Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:15 pm

There, I changed it.
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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Sir Stubby Eyre » Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:17 pm

Much better.
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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Ramer » Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:19 pm

Sir Stubby Eyre wrote:Much better.

Yes, it feels much more manly.
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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Nark » Wed Jun 06, 2012 10:56 am

Your color choice is all over the board. Change the background off of a hard black to a dark grey, preferably cool as opposed to warm. Change the yellow, cyan and white text. The contrast is to high between the text and the background and posts that have a lot of text are going to be hard to read. Choose a color theme for the overall page and you'll have much better success. Go to kuler.adobe.com for some color choices that work together.
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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Orwell » Wed Jun 06, 2012 12:05 pm

"Head Commanding Officer". I haven't seen how the rest of your structure is set up, but that's one huge mouthful.

XCO, perhaps. Something shorter.
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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Osprey » Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:09 pm

This is my teams website. http://kwood0071.wix.com/recon5#!Home/mainPage. If you have speakers turn them down the homepage does have a song.(I couldn't help myself. Going to remove it sometime this week anyways.)

Go to are forum page to get some idea.(This Forum is as close to AP as I could get)

Also the site is not complete done I have to fix some grammar, and organization.
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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Ramer » Wed Jun 06, 2012 3:12 pm

Nark wrote:Your color choice is all over the board. Change the background off of a hard black to a dark grey, preferably cool as opposed to warm. Change the yellow, cyan and white text. The contrast is to high between the text and the background and posts that have a lot of text are going to be hard to read. Choose a color theme for the overall page and you'll have much better success. Go to kuler.adobe.com for some color choices that work together.


I've been thinking about the colors myself, particularly with the text. I appreciate the feedback and the link :)
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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Ramer » Wed Jun 06, 2012 3:13 pm

Orwell wrote:"Head Commanding Officer". I haven't seen how the rest of your structure is set up, but that's one huge mouthful.

XCO, perhaps. Something shorter.

I'll probably just change it to something simpler, like Team Leader. I agree it is a mouthful lol
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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Bad Karma » Wed Jun 06, 2012 4:22 pm

Get a real domain, free domains are garbage, slow, and since you don't control the content of the advertisements on the page they are prone to feeding up malware infested ads. Your colors are all wrong, you've got black, lime green, puke green, baby blue, yellow, and purple going on with the text. This is annoying and doesn't flow well at all. Pick a particular palette and stay within those colors.

@Stark, the music on your site really, really needs to go. Warnings or not, it's absolutely retarded. Send that shit back to your 1998 Geocities page where it belongs.

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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Ramer » Thu Jun 07, 2012 7:02 pm

Bad Karma wrote:Get a real domain, free domains are garbage, slow, and since you don't control the content of the advertisements on the page they are prone to feeding up malware infested ads. Your colors are all wrong, you've got black, lime green, puke green, baby blue, yellow, and purple going on with the text. This is annoying and doesn't flow well at all. Pick a particular palette and stay within those colors.

@Stark, the music on your site really, really needs to go. Warnings or not, it's absolutely retarded. Send that shit back to your 1998 Geocities page where it belongs.

My website is http://www.sotaairsoft.com in case you were curious.


I'll worry about a real domain when I've got a little extra cash. Trust me, I know the suckiness of ads.

As for the colors, definitely working on it. Your site looks good, by the way.
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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Orwell » Thu Jun 07, 2012 7:14 pm

+1 to Bad Karma using an example of his design. :)
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Re: Need some honest opinions

Postby Ramer » Thu Jun 07, 2012 7:38 pm

Orwell wrote:+1 to Bad Karma using an example of his design. :)

I was thinking of going with a black and red scheme before like Bad Karma did, but started experimenting with the MARPAT uniform with a rifle on it for the background which caused me to start screwing around.

I'm going to find a good palette with just a few colors and stick with it. I sure do appreciate everyone's feedback.
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